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Old 09-26-2017, 07:46 PM   #2
taxtorpedo
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Join Date: Dec 2016
Location: Las Vegas, Nevada, USA
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Badly Needed Service You Are Offering

There is no doubt that Instagram is a powerful social media
resource when properly used. However, why should I believe
your claims about superior service?


When I visit your site and click "How It Works" I need
IMMEDIATE proof or I'm unlikely to stick around.

So, I would suggest you integrate the "Case Studies"
into the "How It Works" ad copy. Don't make people
search for it. The "Otis And Eleanor" case study looked
great!

Also, the "About Us" section was bland and uninformative.
A dramatic improvement is needed there.

There is no individual information and no images.
I don't trust ghosts.

Personalize this section to engender trust.
TELL A STORY in this section. People love stories
and will read to the finish to see how the story ends.

Ok. Come back when you have made some of these revisions,
and you will get more input.
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