bidsbypros |
02-20-2013 02:04 PM |
Thanks for the opportunity. The simpler the better. I personally like the simplicity of the site. The picture is inviting and the site's speed is perfect. Your ranking in Alexa, although very irrelevant is high, which you don't need alexa to advertise anyway. The sharpness of the site get A+ because it is reach and inviting yet easy to use.
In my personal opinion, I'd switch the first sentence negative to positive first to encourage the reader to continue. When you start your sentence with "you are not the riches or the most beautiful..." it might turns a reader into an offensive side. I would say the positive fist by stating "you may not be the poorest or ugliest ..." But that just maybe your way of catching their attention.
Good luck and hope it gets to the top
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