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couponsitescrip 02-20-2013 11:12 AM

Happy No2
 
I just launched the site for my 3'th book and wanted some opinions about it.
Let me know if this section is ok with you www.happyno2.com/content/ ( now there are only section from each chapter vs. what could be: one full chapter ).

Link of the site is: www.happyno2.com/

bidsbypros 02-20-2013 02:04 PM

Thanks for the opportunity. The simpler the better. I personally like the simplicity of the site. The picture is inviting and the site's speed is perfect. Your ranking in Alexa, although very irrelevant is high, which you don't need alexa to advertise anyway. The sharpness of the site get A+ because it is reach and inviting yet easy to use.
In my personal opinion, I'd switch the first sentence negative to positive first to encourage the reader to continue. When you start your sentence with "you are not the riches or the most beautiful..." it might turns a reader into an offensive side. I would say the positive fist by stating "you may not be the poorest or ugliest ..." But that just maybe your way of catching their attention.
Good luck and hope it gets to the top
Bids By pros

couponsitescrip 07-05-2013 12:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stevejoseph425 (Post 253420)
waw thats a great news ........

Imagine how I feel :D

Jan Boeykens 07-24-2013 01:34 AM

I would make the "message" more clear on the income page. I missed 'what is this about' there (I may be dumm)

paban 07-24-2013 10:02 AM

Nice website. Looks great..

pvchien 01-19-2016 02:23 AM

looks great...


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