Title tag your opinion please.

[eurozulu]

Hi everyone, re title tag as i understand this, your title tag is you main enticement meaning draw the attention of the potential customer to click on your site for what they are looking for along with the description.
and to be as much or more for the customer rather than the search engines
stick out from the rest if you like.
The company use for some of my SEO have just completed some SEO for me
and have changed the title tag. and i do not like it. to me it's just like all the rest and spam, it's just a group of keywords this is it


Scrap Cars, Car Disposal, Vehicle Disposal, Scrap A Car

the next one is my original one

Legal Scrap Car Disposal DVLA Notified Fully licensed

this to me is far better it has keywords/keyword phrase and think reads well,it also sticks out from the rest what do you think?