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Old 11-28-2011, 08:59 AM   #2
corwinm
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Let me start by saying this is just my opinion, you don't have to take it if you disagree, I'm just trying to offer some pointers.

The first page basically tells you nothing, just "Enter". It's not clear what I will see of give me any reason to actually click it.

After I enter I get a wall of text, again without any explanation or incentive to look further at anything. To me the result is the user thinking "Why am I here? Why should I stay here?".

Again, this is just my opinion, take it for what it's worth.

Good luck.
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