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tnmk308 · 12-10-2016, 11:38 AM

review my website www.hkovn.com tell me some suggestion. thanks

amritrr · 12-10-2016, 11:57 PM

Overall nice site.
A few observations:
Too much white space on the top.
Some issues with English here and there, like your tagline, Make Your Life More Beauty. It should be, Make Your Life More Beautiful.
Good luck with your site...

tnmk308 · 12-12-2016, 07:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by amritrr

Overall nice site.
A few observations:
Too much white space on the top.
Some issues with English here and there, like your tagline, Make Your Life More Beauty. It should be, Make Your Life More Beautiful.
Good luck with your site...

Thanks for your post. I will fix it. because my english skill is not good

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Profgen · 12-12-2016, 04:37 PM

To much blank space. Great tagline but need to improve english

Markco92 · 12-13-2016, 01:21 AM

overall is quite great

but loading time is quite slow, i dont know why maybe, i laptop quite old

tnmk308 · 12-14-2016, 09:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Profgen

To much blank space. Great tagline but need to improve english

Thanks you so muck. Do you give me some ideal to improve this website. And one more thing. i just had learn english.

manokanwal · 12-14-2016, 11:55 PM

This is very good site i would like to give my site also for review to tell us for any Good suggestion for the best and latest mehndi designs.
Our site topic is mehndi for the beautiful girls

Thank you

Skythegreat · 12-14-2016, 11:56 PM

nice website!

tnmk308 · 12-15-2016, 07:13 AM

thanks for all your comment.

Zac123 · 12-16-2016, 07:50 PM

As mentioned above, to much blank red space at the top of the home page. Nice use of quality photos and headlines to match. For just learning English, not to bad, but I did notice some grammatical and spelling errors.

jamesrobertt · 12-16-2016, 10:07 PM

Nice website and great content you posted on this.

12-10-2016, 11:38 AM	#1
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12-10-2016, 11:57 PM	#2
amritrr Registered User Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 15	Overall nice site. A few observations: Too much white space on the top. Some issues with English here and there, like your tagline, Make Your Life More Beauty. It should be, Make Your Life More Beautiful. Good luck with your site... __________________ Ray Themz - Premium WordPress Thems Ray Creations - Responsive Website Design Company

12-12-2016, 04:37 PM	#4
Profgen Registered User Join Date: Dec 2016 Location: United kingdom Posts: 11	Quick observations To much blank space. Great tagline but need to improve english __________________ Creator and owner of www.binarychoicetips.com

12-13-2016, 01:21 AM	#5
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12-14-2016, 11:55 PM	#7
manokanwal Registered User Join Date: Dec 2016 Location: Pakistan Posts: 10	This is very good site i would like to give my site also for review to tell us for any Good suggestion for the best and latest mehndi designs. Our site topic is mehndi for the beautiful girls Thank you __________________ Thank you so much for being a part of our life. Mehndi \| Mehndi Designs \| Mehndi.com.pk \| Visit My website

12-14-2016, 11:56 PM	#8
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12-15-2016, 07:13 AM	#9
tnmk308 Registered User Join Date: Dec 2016 Posts: 9	thanks for all your comment. __________________ Hot News: HKOVN.COM Fanpage : HK- Channel

12-16-2016, 07:50 PM	#10
Zac123 Registered User Join Date: Dec 2016 Posts: 13	As mentioned above, to much blank red space at the top of the home page. Nice use of quality photos and headlines to match. For just learning English, not to bad, but I did notice some grammatical and spelling errors. __________________ Stewart's Tree Pro www.portorangetreeremoval.com Facebook Google+ Youtube

12-16-2016, 10:07 PM	#11
jamesrobertt Registered User Join Date: Dec 2016 Posts: 530	Nice website and great content you posted on this.

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